Jul 26, 2022
To:Heinstein
Hello there,
First of all, thank you so much for taking the time to read my first chapter!
For your question, yes it was intentional from me. I believe that the present tense adds more vividness and immersion for the reader than the more 'descriptive' tone of the past tense - at least that's how I see it. Though reflecting on it, I think it would have been a better choice if I applied it right when the main action started, it may have been a better touch. I will use this opportunity to utilize my tenses even more in the future. Thank you for your comment!