Jun 10, 2022
The worldbuilding here is really cool. Little details like 'phaetonmobiles,' 'galdenberries,' and such are really fun to read, and the way you weave their descriptions in means that there's no stodgy exposition to wade through to understand exactly what's going on with them.
Also, I am very excited to see where Endra's characterization goes. Always a fun archetype, and there are a lot of creative directions you could take her. Overall, I remain incredibly excited for where this story goes, and this chapter only furthers that. Nicely done!
