Sep 14, 2025
Of course I'm having fun with this book. But it would be better if you at least had to write it like a normal novel does. Because the way I read your writing, you goes like "Random BS go!" Instead of trying to take a step back, and try to ponder some big picture of it. Maybe it's just me, but it's all up to you to change your writing style, if you wish to sounded professional.