Jun 25, 2022
To:Deleted User
I think it's pretty crazy how quickly you got a comment out just after I joined a conversation with you for a moment, but in all seriousness I do appreciate the read and thoughts, along with the first comment!😁
I would like to point out Mr Sakuna = Jenki, (Jenki Sakuna), and Xion's best friend is Kazue Kinoskue. Maybe that was just a typo on your part, and I hope that part isn't lost, but I can totally take a look.
The next chapter has a few things talked about by a character instead of the invisible narrator, so I think that's what you're referring to, so consider that point already taken. However I do think though that some things are a little silly to have characters talk about if it's already common knowledge between them, so having a simple explanation very early on to explain why he works where he does felt right. I'll try to aim for some stuff to be talked about more though. I really do appreciate the comment, and will hopefully see more of you soon.
