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Jul 26, 2022
To:Heinstein
Thank you for the comment! I will follow your advice to improve in my writing and story telling because it is true that I make long sentences, mostly to detail the events in the story. Whoever if that makes the story hard to read I will change for better.
Jun 18, 2022
To:Rei
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To:Erii
Thank you for sharing your opinion on the story! I appreciate the feedback, I just want to say that English is not my first language so it is kind of difficult for me to right a good story in English. However this is not an excuse, I will try my best to improve my writing.
