Aug 11, 2022
To:ArgentCosmonaut
Thank you for your critiques! I'm glad you're still enjoying the story! :D
The blood being red instead of brown was an unfortunate oversight on my part, and I'll fix it when I edit the full work again! Thank you for pointing it out! :D
As for the neon bulbs, I'll try to clarify that there's no energy running through them. I have some lightbulbs at home that stay lit a little while after you turn them off, so I was basing the neon bulbs off that concept.
As for the illusion, I should've mentioned here that it came from Rui's mechanical eye. He was projecting the floor to keep himself hidden. This concept comes back in one of the last few chapters, so I was setting it up here. I'll make sure to clarify this when I edit as well!
Thanks again! :D