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Aug 11, 2022
To:Deleted User
Thanks for reading! I really enjoyed writing this scene because it was a cuteness overload.
Aug 10, 2022
🤐 Appreciate your support!
I see where you’re coming from. I changed the note on the first chapter almost right away when you suggested adding his name within the first chapter, so I think that clears up most of it. Thanks for reading!
Aug 09, 2022
She's definitely pushy and that's the reason he decides not to go to the mall tomorrow. However, I don't think it's that unusual that Rika didn't call him by his name. He doesn't directly address her by her name either as they are the only ones talking. It would be weirder if they just kept saying each other's names because what would be the point? They clearly are having a conversation with one another; no need to get the other's attention.
Got it now, you're awesome! It was definitely too many of the genres throwing it off. Thanks a lot!
Oh, I bet you that's it. I might have to readjust the tags. I feel like that's kind of wild that I can't have both considering how much they matter to the story, but I guess that's how it is. Thanks!
I appreciate that! This is a rewrite of my novel over on Scribblehub where originally the MC didn't have a name until the very end. I will add in his name at the beginning here though, as I totally meant to do that this time around! I'll add some more description too. I just need to figure out why my novel isn't appearing under the MAL contest first...