Jul 08, 2023
Bruh Victor is totally an generic archetype character who comes and stirs up drama, but at the same time its not like this doesn't happen in real life. It also serves the plot well so there's no compliant here. You didn't do a bad thing when writing Victor in Tomo.
Overall the story is great, the internal dialogue of Junior's struggles is relatable, his interactions with the ex-idol is fantastic, the wholesomeness isn't regulated to only being with the love interest but also displayed with the manager and his wife. It's wonderful, looking forward for more.
And if you have the time please give my story and look at. Thanks for the read until next time.