Feb 26, 2024

Note to my readers This is the last completed chapter for Part II. I have a few projects that are taking priority right now, so I will be getting back to this within the next couple of weeks. In the meantime, please post any suggestions, observations or other input you may have. Even if it's negative as long as it's constructive criticism I'll accept it.
I appreciate your patience.
Thank you for reading my work.

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Feb 25, 2024

To:SA796

When I do my revision I’ll try to fit some more in

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Feb 11, 2024

To:SA796

Yeah I’ll go into that in more detail in the second book

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Feb 11, 2024

To:SA796

That’s why the Nordac Empire wanted all those demi human slaves

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Feb 11, 2024

To:SA796

Another thing about Rowan, he doesn’t wait on orthers and is very deliberate in his approach to battle.

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Feb 11, 2024

I guess I forgot that he had been given an intelligence briefing on what was going on. He also saw that there were demi humans among the slaughtered. I’ll work on that some.

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Feb 11, 2024

To:SA796

By the way, I am thinking that that soldier will get some personal attention from X either at the end of book one or at some point in book two. Book two will be focused on the war between Tier, led by Rowen and the Nordac Empire.
Book three will focus on the battle with the Fates.
In case you didn’t know I write by train of thought. As if I were already watching it on tv.
I hadn’t thought about the time he spent at Tier Castle but I understand what you are saying. I’ll put some thought into it 🤔

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Feb 11, 2024

To:SA796

“I’ll show him how ugly I can get!”😉😏

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Feb 06, 2024

To:SA796

Dragon fyre is really liquid mana that’s shot out from glands on the inside of their mouth. As the mana sublimates it burns everything at extremely high temperatures. Just fyi. I won’t really cover these details until I get to book two. But part two has a hint of the process.

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Feb 05, 2024

To:SA796

Of course she gets it by the bushel full.
By the way they weren’t the ones who hurt her. She gets her revenge on them in part two.

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Feb 05, 2024

To:SA796

When you finish part one please check out my other book here on Honeyfeed. It’s a steampunk fantasy book and the first book is complete, just in need of editing.

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Feb 04, 2024

To:SA796

It’s three days but a friend of mine said that it’s sounds too biblical and since he is linked to the green moon he suggested I use moon rises instead. Still the same amount of time.
Yes if someone destroys the green moon he will start to age and die.

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Feb 04, 2024

To:SA796

If you remember the prologue, the statue that brought a tear to his eye was that of Queen Kitarra. He still loves her some 200 years later.

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Feb 04, 2024

To:SA796

Had Jade not pulled him back onto his ass he wouldn’t have been able to save the distressing damsels 😉

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Feb 03, 2024

I truly appreciate your input and support 🙏

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