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Author, artist, gamer, and anime lover from Ontario, Canada.
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Nov 11, 2025
To:kcayu
❤️
Nov 10, 2025
Underground gambling... Still feels like it'll link back to the father. 🤔
Minor suggestion: you could combine 'The drive was silent.' with the next sentence to avoid repeating 'drive'.
Missing word: her 'hair' pulled back neatly
Minor tense issue: ‘hiding’ should be ‘hid’ to match masked.
Nov 09, 2025
Brought the city stink with you xD
Nice atmosphere build. Eerie start~ Probably best to not even look outside during the night. @_@
They both know =o Is it the father?
To:TheLeanna_M
There is a hint of one 🤐 But wasn't looking to go full blown on that.
Thanks! 😀
Nov 07, 2025
Half expected Pippa to pull a Kirby and suck the lizard in anyway 🤣
So they are connected by a case, but a bit indirectly~ Nice touch.
I've confused it so many times in the past @_@
Thanks! Glad you like her ❤️
Nov 06, 2025
Pippa saves him again~
Blaming her for it! 😡 Why send her off alone like that? Who knows what would happen to her alone after that. 😭 Poor Haruka.
Small typos: Hikari 'lay' on the floor, motionless. Her head rested at an unnatural angle, blood spreading 'slowly' beneath her hair.
Nov 05, 2025
They even changed the birth certificate. @_@
Ooh, a twin! But 'was' D=
Nov 04, 2025
Good work~ Hmm, is there a case that ends up linking them? 🤔
Small typo: Jun’s 'focus' never left the road
Thanks! There may be a hint of one~ 🤭