Jan 29, 2019
To:GreenFlame000
Thank you so much for taking the time to read it!  
Your comments were really helpful, and I'm so glad you took the time =3 I can definitely start splitting up paragraphs more, it's a huge help to know I should be more focused on that!  I appreciate it!  
I'm also so happy you enjoyed so many aspects about it in specific!  Thank you, and thank you again!