Aug 23, 2023
To:ChronoSigma
The "I'm afraid" one, is already introduced as you read further. It's already obvious.
The ¡uy! part is an expression of Spanish being surprised.
I'm already using Grammarly.
Hesekiel's character is like that. He won't admit which side he was because of reasons, and you will find out in the future chapters. (The plot is half-complete. Almost done. Already have an outline.)
Aksel misunderstood Hesekiel's words, and you can see a lot of foreshadowing.
Actually, there are a lot of clues and hints in chapter 3, but I will not tell since it will be a spoiler.
The POV is a mixture of Aksel and Hesekiel, but more on Aksel's side if you look it closely.
Hesekiel is more on dropping hints and foreshadowing.
For example: Hesekiel drops the name 'Chloe,' and it hints about the expression of recognition in Chapter 3.
