Sep 13, 2025
Hi Bubbles, thank you for your thoughtful analysis of normativity and othering, I found it very interesting. It’s definitely a complicated world, very different from ours, but similar in some rules and patterns that you’ve captured well. I’m really glad this chapter made you reflect on these themes.
Now that I know you’re reading the story with such interest and thoughtfulness, it gives me the strength and motivation to keep going and finish it. Don’t worry, I will finish it on time, and that’s also thanks to you. If you continue reading the story, I’ll make sure to provide other points you might find interesting.
The word limit for this story is between 50,000 and 80,000 (because of MAL contest), so I can’t spend too much time building a very detailed world, but I will do my best to write an engaging story that, even if it can’t go too deep, will try to touch on different themes.
Thank you for the time you took to write this comment, I really appreciate it.