Jun 16, 2024
To:Bubbles
Thank you for the feedback!
I was hoping to receive some feedback as well after seeing you in other entries. I do agree that it ended up being more of a oneshot than a short story as I have an unhealthy obsession with writing series.
Should the day come I may decide to pick this story up. For now I'll continue to work on improving my common mistakes and overall writing skills.
Thanks again!
