Nov 16, 2023
To:IncognitoMe
thank you! Yeah, I can understand your critique. My original intention was to show that the MC is spiraling, and she's just using her 'Eros' as an excuse for her new obsession with staying alive. I was interested in the interplay between Eros and Thanatos in this world and wanted to explore it. But upon reading it again, I think the balance between that aspect and the love letter aspect could have been done better. Unfortunately I can't change it now... but oh well, lol. Thank you very much for the kind comment!