Nov 08, 2023
To:lolitroy
It's nice to see different opinions. I do agree with the redundancy of some of my phrases. My thought process for some of them was a bit weird. Like you said, "muttered softly," seems redundant. But you can mutter harshly as well, so I believe that's why I put it there. However, I would want to fix it now, but it's too late.