Mar 31, 2024

It's kinda odd that no enemy sensed Jade. Did her powers increase?

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Mar 04, 2024

Oh demons are in the picture now

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Feb 20, 2024

I miss Xyarra's playful banter with Rowan.

Rothenburg 👀 Google, Oh, so the city looks like this. 

You should explain a little bit more so people who don't know don't have to Google it, like I didn't know what Morgaranth is, but you explain it so I can imagine a mostly human-looking person with horns who has a somewhat demonic vibe and great magic. 

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Feb 11, 2024

To:WhiteWolfCaptain

I know you mentioned that dummy humans are better for elixir than normal humans.

I was just thinking about how many people are connected to the making of the elixir and how powerful it will be.

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Feb 11, 2024

Elixir of youth hmmm

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Feb 11, 2024

It feels weird that Rowan will kill people he doesn't know anything about to save strangers😕. Have you given him the power to see the future or something?

Or am I missing something? I hope I'm missing something

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Feb 11, 2024

I would like it more if you told more about his days at the palace, how he started preparing for this journey, and why.

I know you will tell it, but you will tell it in a past sentence. I wanted to be more present. He's doing it. He is thinking, and he thought of this solution, not like he thoughted, he decided, and now we are here.

That's a side I truly enjoyed the first part, and I hope the same for part 2.

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Feb 11, 2024

Dude, when the soldier said X was ugly .I was like Oh no he Fucked Up lmao

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Feb 06, 2024

WhiteWolfCaptain,
As you know, I assumed you'd give Kit the most screen time. I was pleasantly mistaken; you awarded it to X, and you've written her character so beautifully that I believe I like her the most as well.

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Feb 06, 2024

Yes I just finished chapter 23 and now I know...

Well, one other reason to look forward to Part 2 then 😁

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Feb 06, 2024

So how X got hurt is still a mystery,
But I still loved it how she obliterated them with her blue films.

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Feb 05, 2024

“For the Creator's sake, we're the only legion to have brought down a dragon!”

Finally, we got something on how Xyarra got hurt.

I hope X get her revenge gets her revenge

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Feb 04, 2024

"Well, it's like this. I can be hurt and even die. But my life force is linked to the Green Moon that orbits the white moon. If I'm killed, then after three moonrises or one full orbit of the Green Moon then I will be resurrected and made whole."

How much time is that

Well does that means he will die if someone destroys the green moon

Hmmm

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Feb 04, 2024

I really enjoyed the whole wholesomeness of this chapter. the entire chapter, I was smiling.

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Feb 04, 2024

If in the next chapter he says it was a dream, I'm gonna lose it.
 
But I have trust in your depravity. WhiteWolfCaptain

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