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Realized life is not about that 9 to 5 and now I have some time to think about what to do with my writing hobby.
I can take constructive criticism so don't hold back.
I know well enough I am just an amateur.
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Sep 15, 2025
I swear those titles alone could win a creativity contest damn lol
Aug 31, 2025
To:Mai
Well, they are not the friendliest, but they are not that strong either😆
Thanks a lot! I was really curious if people consider it good
Jul 17, 2025
To:Nozo
The writing felt really good. It went straight to the point but still presented a bit of emotion.
I am sure doing it first person also helped with this, but that's exactly why I feel like you've done it really well.
Good luck!😄
May 26, 2025
To:Bubbles
Happy I was able to pass on that bromance feeling!
Well... her ways may forever remain a secret between them.
May 23, 2025
Lol. I think readers, especially the jury, would have been really confused if I suddenly changed the language.
As for the name order, great catch! I was wondering if anyone would notice it.
Haha. Interesting that I was able to have people feel this about her. I was really curious about how readers would take to her unusual personality.
Feb 23, 2025
I already have the ending planned out so we will see, maybe you got it right from the prologue. haha
The whole "the end is now" theme does push towards a tragic ending thought. As the prologue says. Things don't *usually* get better when waiting for tragedy.