Nov 12, 2024
Love this concept, reminds me of the book Mortal Engines. For your first ever novel, this is amazing work!
Some tips: really try work on the grammar, I could see many typos. Work on improving the flow of the piece, Some parts feel a bit rushed. Elaborate some more on the robots that Makor created, it sort of jumped to it after the prologue.
Looking forward to the next chapter ! 👍
