Jan 26, 2025
A wonderful conclusion. And like many stories I love reading, I wasn't ready for it to end quite yet. Yours is a story I genuinely got hooked on from the beginning. The ensemble cast of characters, the realistic portrayal of leadership and what it means to be a leader at such a young age. The weight of the responsibility. I think it was all done very well. I wish I could go more in depth about the characters. But due to the way I read stories using my screen reader, and due to the way I type using the voice typing, I unfortunately cannot mention specific characters because I didn't quite see the spelling of the names. I only heard them. But I will say everybody is distinct and memorable. I especially like the girl in charge of cooking and the other girl from Japan. And of course, my main boy Brigham. As a beginner writer myself,, they are of course certain parts of our craft we need to improve with time. And I wish you much luck on your journey. I also wish we had more space adventures with the characters. But I will be keeping an eye out for future stories. Thank you for sharing your work. I had a fun time reading.
