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Sep 02, 2025

To:Barbados Nascar

Thank you! I really wanted the battlefield to feel both intense and heavy with emotion, so I’m glad that came through. Means a lot that you enjoyed it 🙂

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:1

Aug 29, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:0

Aug 28, 2025

Wow, she’s really dense… but at least she cared for Vergil in the end.

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:4

Aug 26, 2025

Interesting chapter! At the start I think there’s a small typo— instead of lying you wrote lyin. Just thought I’d point it out 🙂
May Vergil rest in peace 🕊️

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:3

Aug 26, 2025

Thanks a lot! I tried to make the clash feel more than just flashy action. I’m glad it gave that epic feeling to you!

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:3

Aug 26, 2025

To:RedPen

Thank you so much, that means a lot! I’m glad the style connected with you too

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:2

Aug 24, 2025

To:Eyrith

Yes, what you said is exactly right—and that’s what makes people more lovable and real. I’ll definitely make a note of it. I also really admire how you balance the scenes with humor.

To be honest, I loved the dialogues too. I was laughing so hard when she said ‘mother dearest’—up until then she was this tough girl, and then suddenly her tone flipped. And then, ‘off to risk my life for soup’—bro, that was just too funny 😂.

Even the monster encounter had me cracking up, and then you smoothly shifted from humor to emotion after she took a fall. That transition was so well done. That’s why I said—you really write like a pro 👏

Death’s Idea of a Joke: Welcome to Life 2.0, Now Figure It Out

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

I really liked how you explained it—‘they smell like rotting cheese left in a dirty hamster cage.’ That line was so detailed and vivid! And man, the whole thing feels like having your own Iron Man suit but in an isekai world—I loved it 😄

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:2

Aug 24, 2025

Oh man, that was really fun—I enjoyed it a lot! The dialogues were top-notch, and now I completely get what you meant when you gave me feedback on my chapters. I’ll definitely try to improve on that.

I also loved the way you explained details and gave examples—it made everything so clear. And haha, the ‘I hate chicken’ line cracked me up.

The stealing scene was awesome too, it really made me like the character even more. You’re a pro for sure 👏

Death’s Idea of a Joke: Welcome to Life 2.0, Now Figure It Out

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

To:Eyrith

Thank you so much! I’m really glad Winter’s presence came through strong. And I appreciate the note about the narration-to-dialogue flow—I’ll definitely work on smoothing that out. Your feedback really helps, so I’d love to hear your thoughts as you keep reading 🙂.

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

To:RedPen

Thank you! I really wanted that despair to come through, so I’m glad it hit. And yeah… Winter’s only just getting started 😅

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:1

Aug 24, 2025

Thanks a lot! Yeah, I wanted the dialogue to hint at that split without saying too much. And haha, you got me—Winter’s name fits a little too well 😆

Blood Pawn : 400 New Years (Book 1)

Chapter:0

Aug 23, 2025

To be honest, your cover art was what hooked me first—it’s absolutely top-notch. But after reading your story, I’m even more excited. I truly wish all your prayers come true, and that you will amaze us with your masterpiece

I am the Hero of My Story

Chapter:0

Aug 23, 2025

Your writing is really good—I like how you explain every single detail so clearly, it kept me engaged. And the cover is definitely a strong point, it really adds to the impression.

The only thing I personally felt was about the title placement. I get that the color choice connects with the character impression, which is clever—but since it blends a bit with the art, it’s a little hard to read at first glance. The art itself is top notch, no doubt—it’s just that the title could stand out more

Arctic Blue ~ At the World’s End, a Prayer Beneath the Sky ~

Chapter:0

Aug 23, 2025

your synopsis hooked me instantly, and I had to dive in.
Even in the first half, I actually got angry at the scene, which shows how strongly your writing pulled me in. The dialogues were sharp —it was really well done 👏

Armored Soul - I got reincarnated in another world with a mech suit!

Chapter:1

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