Jan 27, 2025
Kira’s interaction with the child is fun and engaging, but there’s a slight inconsistency in the scene. It raises the question of why a child would be so comfortable talking with a stranger in a public place, especially when Kira starts questioning if he’s alone and if he’s allowed to roam freely. While it’s clear she’s being playful, it might come off as odd that she’s so casually engaging with a kid without any concern for boundaries. This part feel out of place, especially when directed at a child. It could come off as uncomfortable or intrusive. Removing this interaction would make the scene more lighthearted and keep Kira’s character fun without crossing any boundaries. Otherwise, the pacing and world-building are solid.
