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VegaStar_LVS

I am a YouTuber who loves to write my own stories and characters. I am not the best but I will keep trying.

registered at: Feb 11, 2025

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Aug 03, 2026

To:NotWriting

I'm sorry I've been very busy with work. I'm almost done with the next chapter though. Expect it this week.

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:3

Jul 24, 2026

To:NotWriting

I wish my schedule could line up with friends but I am on my own for this one. I'm in the middle of the next chapter so perhaps when I'm not busy I will go back and re work a bit of the previous chapters.

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:3

Jul 13, 2026

To:NotWriting

Ah thank you for another comment! Am I allowed to edit the chapters or not for this contest. I thought I read somewhere that I couldn't but perhaps I could be wrong.
As for spicy... I'll see what I can do. My best option is wholesome stuff with some spice. Not my usual spciy yuri stuff. Anyways I'll get back on this site tomorrow once I get through chapter 4. Thanks again!

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:1

Jul 11, 2026

To:NotWriting

Also thank you for liking my art! I'm so glad my art at least got someone's attention.

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:0

Jul 11, 2026

To:NotWriting

Don't worry about spamming! I welcome any comments. As a rookie YouTuber, relevant comments help motivate me to keep going.
I was about to upload the next chapter but now I will triple check my chapter before uploading it.

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:0

Jul 11, 2026

To:NotWriting

I don't have many friends that are available to check. Especially when the minimum word count for the whole story is 50,000 words. That means they have to be available every single moment I finish a chapter. I truly appreciate your tips! I was worried that no one might not say anything.

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:0

Jul 11, 2026

To:NotWriting

I have been told about the "show don't tell" but honestly it's a bit difficult understand. I normally write in first person perspective so I get into details about the character's thoughts and feelings. I want to challenge myself with a different stule. Do you mind sharing an example so I can see if I can improve in the coming chapters?

I am writing american English. I didn't realize that "Towards" is British English. I'll keep an eye out when reviewing my writing.

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The Blessed Hero is Just an Ordinary Girl

Chapter:0