Feb 12, 2025

Man, I feel for Noa, just trying to do right by his people but unfortunately its most likely not going to end well for him and then repeat the cycle.

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Feb 12, 2025

This is so frustratingly satisfying. I wish that Noa would wish would conform, because I'm talking the screen like a crazy person about how foolish he is and how much danger he is in. While in reality I completely understand why he is doing this.

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Feb 12, 2025

I have to say the racial parallels are quite prevalent and done well, especially in the social climate that we find ourselves in now. I will be interested to know how the author weaves that in as story continues, so far, its well-executed.

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Feb 12, 2025

First of all, I love the fact that they have switched technology for religion, its very reminiscent of today and lack of wanting to deal with the reality and the permanence of one's choices.

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Feb 12, 2025

What's really interesting is that a far flung as this fantasy might seem it really isn't that far away from reality if we really take time to think about it. I think you did a great job painting the picture to start this story.

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Feb 11, 2025

things are really heating up! Ava's diary entries make everything feel so real, and the move to LA adds a whole new twist

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Feb 11, 2025

Phil's transformation into a TV-headed person is both fascinating and heartbreaking. Seeing how he communicates and the struggles he faces, especially with his dreams and faith, really hit me.

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Feb 11, 2025

what a start! Ava's diary entries pulled me right in, and the whole TV mystery with her brother is super intriguing. Can't wait to see where this story goes!"

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Feb 11, 2025

Thats what I'm talking about! lets go!

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Feb 11, 2025

This is so good, yet such a tease at the same time!

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Feb 11, 2025

Its about to go down. lets see if she can pull it off

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Feb 11, 2025

It's looking pretty good so far. let's see if she comes out alive.

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Feb 11, 2025

Absolutely loved this chapter! It’s so rare to find a story that pulls you in from the very first page, but this one did exactly that.

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