Feb 16, 2025

This chapter is such a rollercoaster! The way John’s past and present collide is masterfully done

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Feb 16, 2025

This book is full of surprise. Such a fantastic read!

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Feb 16, 2025

I love how this chapter dives into Sheer’s complex character. He’s not just an advisor; he’s a manipulator, always thinking two steps ahead.

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Feb 15, 2025

The emotional intensity of this chapter is incredible.

Tum and Meredith’s reunion, Quil’s tragic end, and Sheer’s final confrontation all come together in such a gripping way.

The action is so vividly described, and the stakes feel higher than ever. This is great storytelling, full of drama and resolution!

Awesome story! I really enjoyed this!

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Feb 15, 2025

Tum's pride and anger may cost him his life. This is a great chapter and I am enjoying this a lot.

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Feb 15, 2025

Ending sets the stage for a dramatic climax. I am so invested in this story and I love it.

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Feb 15, 2025

The dialogue between Meredith and Tum feels strained and awkward.
Sense a big change and a big shock is awaiting to happen.

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Feb 15, 2025

Overall, this is a awesome chapter.

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Feb 15, 2025

That ending creates a sense of suspense and isolation. I really appreciate your works on this book.

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Feb 15, 2025

I especially loved how the moment was broken not by an emotional outburst but by the sudden appearance of the trolls, which feels almost symbolic of how Tum’s emotions are constantly interrupted by the chaos of their journey.

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Feb 15, 2025

The slow realization of betrayal, especially by someone you trust, is portrayed excellently through Meredith’s dialogue and inner thoughts.

The chapter is a pivotal moment for her as she stands at a crossroads, facing the harsh reality of her situation. Alphonso’s manipulation, combined with Meredith’s vulnerability, makes for a gripping conflict.

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Feb 15, 2025

The scene between Aris and Buckle is emotionally intense, and it’s clear that Aris’ position as a soldier has made her suppress feelings that are now rushing to the surface.
Her hesitation and the way she tries to avoid giving in to Buckle’s confession make her character so much more intriguing. It’s like she’s fighting not just him but her own vulnerability.

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Feb 15, 2025

I feel like Tum's journey is taking him to a place of deeper self-awareness and sacrifice. This is great!

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Feb 15, 2025

The way the past continues to haunt Tum through Sheer’s schemes adds such depth to the story. I’m completely invested in what happens next

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Feb 15, 2025

Sheer's manipulative nature and the way he toys with Bernard's emotions are chilling. Wondering how Bernard will respond to his threats!

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