Sep 02, 2025
I'm back with another chapter and have been trying to improve with each one I post!
What I tried to improve on in this chapter and the next ones continuing forward is bringing motion to my prose and to my story!
I knew that something was off when I read some of the other chapters and while reading the second volume of Failure Frame by Kaoru Shinozaki, I realized it was that I was moving way too slow!
And I also learned a bit about the function of dialogue and how it is an ACTION. It makes sense once you hear it, but I didn't really understand it until I saw it in motion while reading Failure Frame.
It's honestly been crazy how much I've been learning about the craft these past few days, even if my story is a bit generic and sloppy lol.
Anyways, if you've enjoyed the chapter or story so far, consider leaving a like! I'd really appreciate it.
And with that, I hope you have a wonderful rest of your day/night!
-Huey Linh