Dec 22, 2025
To:Makari_Mikage_Japan
Hey, thanks for the feedback. 😃 You'll notice that in these earlier chapters, it is always set stage, then dialogue with movement descriptions. The reason is that my initial writing was for a visual format, so I wrote it more like a movie script, but as I continued writing, it started to shift.
But I hope to get better at streamlining the narrative.
Thank you for checking my work out ❤️
