Apr 17, 2025
To:Han Quixote
Thanks for the tips and the heads-up! I had no idea I could even reply to a comment—also, really appreciate you pointing out the third-person mistake earlier. And about the LYRICA thing, that totally flew under my radar, so thanks again for catching it.
As for continuing the story, I think I still need to clarify a few things that make sense in my head but haven’t been fully explained in the narrative yet. I’m considering writing a few chapters from the other characters’ points of view so they can talk about themselves and share how they see Mark and IRIS.
I’ve come up with a bunch of possible plot directions for the future, but what’s really on my mind right now is the relationship between Mark and IRIS. I want to avoid overly heavy or overly philosophical chapters and try to find a balance—something that mixes the existential crisis with moments that are lighter and a bit more fun.
