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I happen to like *nice* men.
Jan 20, 2026
It's a little dialogue heavy, but I like where you're going with it so far. Reminds me a bit of Constantine, urban fantasy with an edge to it.
A good start! I'm looking forward to learning more about Haru and her power, as well as who "they" are.
Jan 17, 2026
I like it! You're setting up some interesting characters, I can't wait to explore their dynamics as the story continues. Sato seems like an underdog-type romantic lead, so I'm interested what will happen with him. And he seems sweet, looking after the elderly. That's a good trait to have.
JJ's Grandmother seems... intriguing. Quite the hidden presence behind the scenes!
And I can't help but notice the work you've put in to improve your writing, good job! Most people don't bother to work at it once they start. I look forward to reading more!
I like it so far, Jerry seems interesting as a character, and his classmates make me seethe, I can't wait for him to show them up (Or beat them up). And I'm curious how he knows things about the clan that was wiped out.
