May 18, 2025

Elisabeth has so much restraint not to get physical, I am pissed at Margot and want to slap her SO BAD

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May 18, 2025

Alright crew, get your pitchforks and torches, we are going on a bitch hunt.

This chapter had wonderful pacing and emotional whiplash that had me pumped as hell at the end.

ALSO ELISABETH NEEDS TO LEARN HOW TO COMMUNICATE. (Its ok, we all mess that up with our first love)

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May 18, 2025

oh my lord your ability to write such natural chemistry is impeccable! I find myself smiling like an idiot at Finley and Elisabeth’s interactions. I was particularly fond of the play fighting.

I was thinking what kind of magic Elisabeth would use and once she said flowers, I could imagine nothing else she would pick!

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May 18, 2025

I think in the beginning it was comfy but slowly became more uneasy as the allusions to the reincarnation became apparent

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May 17, 2025

This whole library scene had a beautiful air of unease and discomfort. The librarian helped cut the tension again but it quickly reestablished itself. Fantastic work!

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May 17, 2025

I love the idea that Diana is just around the corner at any point, just ready to mess with Finley

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May 17, 2025

BATTLE MAID! BATTLE MAID! BATTLE MAID!

I love seeing Elisabeth become happier and happier in being a woman, even to the point of wanting to train in some sort of combat while staying cute!

You need to stop giving me S tier ships, WHO AM I SUPPOSED TO ROOT FOR

Also Elisabeth must be over the moon to stay a bit longer

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May 17, 2025

GOD the usage of her ganing knowledge was absolutely outstanding and was a logical conclusion to jump to. MAYBE she isn’t that dense… maybe.

The chemistry between Finley and Elizabeth is becoming undeniable and I can just imagine them standing back to back, hands glowing and fighting alongside each other with magic.

Elizabeth would also make a fantastic tactician

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May 17, 2025

YOU BITCH I THOUGHT YOU WERE GOING TO KILL DIANA WITH THE TITLE OF THE CHAPTER!

Your action sequences continue to be stellar and your writing for Aileen has MY maternal instincts flaring up. She feels like a genuine child and is another example of your wonderful character writing

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May 17, 2025

To:Celeste Altalune

additionally:

baaa ba baaa baaaa baa baaa ba. baaa baaa ba baaaaa bababa baaa ba baa ba. ba.

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May 17, 2025

I LOVE THE COMBAT IN THIS CHAPTER! I was on the edge of my seat and the synergy between the twins was so peak! I love the idea of the pillar and think it was really cute how Elizabeth just naturally was hoping no one was looking up her skirt, very nice touch of character development and probably the only time that trope marks such development

ALSO HOW DARE YOU KILL MY GOAT

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May 17, 2025

I loved the little interactions with head Diana. The moments when you put your comedy on display are always highlights. That being said, this chapter also shows Elizabeths continued acceptance of her new life where things she would have originally made a comment about, like enjoying being told she looked pretty with a flower in her hair, are becoming normalized.

Also,is sheorsach gay and da-sheorsach bi?

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May 17, 2025

Ahhh and so begins the Bisexual panic. I absolutely adore your depiction of repressed sexuality and the confusion that results of such.

I was also curious, how did you come up with the words for this language?

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May 16, 2025

As someone with a similar aversion to children as Elizabeth is initially I would like to say:

HELLO YES? I WOULD LIKE TO ADOPT ONE CHILD PLEASE! NO I DONT CARE IF SHE ALREADY HAS PARENTS SHES MINE

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May 16, 2025

I cant wait for the BBG to foil our hero by asking her to set the table for a formal dinner

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