Jun 18, 2025
Karian,
That mech battle was visceral. I loved reading every moment of it. The action had real weight and tension, it honestly reminded me of the kind of intensity you'd get from Code Geass battles. You really brought the chaos and emotion of the battlefield to life.
Graham’s character is already shaping up to be super compelling. I’m really curious about what’s driving him, and the reveal that Siegfried is his father, and that he also has a daughter, adds a whole new layer of mystery. Clearly, Sieg had a partner at some point, and now I’m hooked wondering what happened to them.
This chapter really ramped things up, and I’m fully in. Can’t wait to see what happens next. Great job again!
—Billy
