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Nov 12, 2025

Dude, real cap your quality is getting better and better.

THE TALE OF A MODERN DAY DEMON KING

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

Let yourself be surprised, now the action really begins.

Hehe, :)

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:4

Oct 14, 2025

To:Earlo_18

Thanks :)

I actually wanted to see how I could incorporate magic into the world without explaining too much.
I think it worked better with such a natural dialogue instead of being bombarded with information.

Yes, the doctor is inspired by my childhood doctor. He was always very relaxed too.

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:3

Oct 14, 2025

Hanla the Dragonfist, I wanted to have a pointlessly exaggerated name.
And in the end, the name turned out to be more fitting than I thought.

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

To:Fantos Pinto

Hanla Muscle 💪🏻

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:2

Oct 14, 2025

To:Karian / KomakiP

I wrote the scene three times so that she sits down. :)

Yes, there's a lot of tension right now with Hanla and Harima, and I already know a lot.

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:2

Oct 07, 2025

To:Earlo_18

Honestly, that's good. I've been writing for about twelve years.
And English isn't my native language, but my third language 😅.

That's why I had difficulties with my first work in English. Because I had a different basis in German.

But what I can say is, if it really is your first book.
it's not boring, you turn casual scenes into something good. You build the world directly, of course everything can be improved and you're never satisfied.

But honestly, keep going.
Because it's lively, the characters have depth, and you take genre tropes and turn them into your own elements.

Still, it's a good move to publish everything here.

A friend of mine sent it to me because he thought the title was funny, and it turned out to be a good read. Reading a chapter is a little highlight of my morning commute to work.

Reincarnated as the Gun Hero in Another World Volume 1

Chapter:5

Oct 06, 2025

That's good comedy. Just the dynamic of the two of them. Joshua reminds me of the trope "Thriving in chaos".
And that fits, Amy is also likeable. She says no and at the end, I don't know if I'm interpreting it wrong, she's also interested in what the outcome is.

Amy's Talisman is..

Chapter:2

Oct 06, 2025

It's always interesting how guns exist in a fantasy scenario. It's simply the most efficient killing machine we humans have ever designed.

I'm imagining a game like this right now, and you just have to shout "GIVE ME AMMO" as a reload.

But that's also good balancing, he's got bullets. I don't know if you use it, but if he's just stunned in the fight because he has no bullets and he has to shout it. It gives the opponent a chance to react.

If they can react, it looks like meissatsu doesn't have bad aim.

Reincarnated as the Gun Hero in Another World Volume 1

Chapter:5

Oct 02, 2025

To:Fantos Pinto

Talking doesn't always help, and Jerome simply skipped the nine cutscene.

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:9

Oct 02, 2025

To:Goh Hayah

I actually know the feeling. Back then, I wrote a lot for the theater. It's always a bit unusual, but in this case I don't feel it.
It just feels fluid.
And that's good.

The Death on Green (and the cat who always lands on foot)

Chapter:1

Oct 02, 2025

To:Karian / KomakiP

She keeps fighting

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:4

Oct 02, 2025

To:Earlo_18

You are the author of gun hero, first of all I apologize for not knowing the guns they fired.

Hanla is a stubborn character, she will surely cause more heroics and chaos.

Silver Sky - Let me rewrite your story

Chapter:0

Oct 02, 2025

I'm a fan of well-written natural dialog.

You actually play good with the subject "death" I want to read more.

Their dynamics in particular are perfect.

Also that he complains less about being dead than that it's cold and he might catch a cold.

And let's be honest, it's a very high-quality, pleasant read.

Yes, and that she doesn't feel these simple things like the cold or the taste itself. Interesting structure.

The Death on Green (and the cat who always lands on foot)

Chapter:1

Oct 01, 2025

An isekai about airplanes and or flying objects because griffins are also there and his co-pilot is simply called Anemone or also called Wind Flower in my country at least.

Let's see what kind of dynamic develops.

Crashing Into You: My Co-Pilot is a Princess

Chapter:1

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