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I draw anime characters and create their stories

registered at: Jul 11, 2025

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Oct 06, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

Thank you so much for the review; I loved all your comments, and I really wanted to reply, but I held back since that would have blasted way too many notifs.
I understand my own lackings as a writer and I hope with future stories I can write something which is well polished
My typos, grammatical errors and the formatting choice made the story waver
But thank you so much for reading my story. I am truly grateful.
Ps you couldnt guess

STAR AWESOME

Chapter:61

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I looked through the chapters you mentioned had formatting errors
some things like the texting, mind contacts and the background voices are intentionally done
I tried to be stylish with the formating....I think it was a wrong choice
so I hate to admit my pathetic formatting was my fault
I had no idea I would make the story suffer because of me

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Chapter:19

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I am glad you gave the story a try considering the earlier chapters were simply despicable
thank you

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Chapter:8

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

I am sorry I can see my writing capabilities are below average in comparison to most writers
I learnt alot about writing-styles over the course of this story

STAR AWESOME

Chapter:4

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

won't grow until they use magic to grow them

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Chapter:1

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mara

he will bring humanity and will show a mild transition himself

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Chapter:22

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mara

they are selfish but at times when possible they would team up
star Awesome members are mostly on the same side when they are up against outside star issues
you will see that quite prominently during the fights at the sand dunes
but when it involves personal issues they are generally selfish

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Chapter:25

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mario Nakano 64

you are right I should have...

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Chapter:26

Oct 06, 2025

To:Mara

yeah funny right

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Chapter:26

Oct 05, 2025

To:Mara

I am glad you are adopting to their awful personalities.... honestly I didn't even try to cover them up... I tried to lay them bare for judgment 😂

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Chapter:21

Oct 04, 2025

To:Mai

Ina is a wise woman what she thought was on mark

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:5

Oct 04, 2025

To:Mai

how can they say it's gruesome when he is a snake man.....

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:5

Oct 04, 2025

To:Mai

that is quite concerning actually....you might have a point

A Mythical Love Affair

Chapter:7

Oct 04, 2025

To:Hi writer

yup yup how can he suddenly become op

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Chapter:28

Oct 04, 2025

To:Hi writer

this might be the best speculation I have seen
but sen is a human

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Chapter:27

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