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Aug 03, 2025
Reading this is like watching a movie! I can't wait to read the rest!
Wow! I was really caught on the phone part. Incredible work!
Relating with the middle child vibes ^.^
I love your first person narrative and how it feels like we're in the mc's mind :)
Aug 02, 2025
To:littlewizard
you're absolutely right ;-; I'm thinking about sectioning it into three parts as I have an awful habit in overextending things. Thanks for your feedback!! :D
There's an unfinished sentence! 'Can God or whatever entity is looking out just—' 😅
Great work!! I'm so happy to see another writer that has a long chapter!! It makes me feel so much better! :D My first chapter has 5,000 words :P
I really enjoyed this! I love how detailed your descriptive language is! Makes me wanna work harder on mine :)