Jul 25, 2025
To:Hollow
I appreciate your feedback and understand where you're coming from. My imagining was that the "veil" was obscuring her to be bland but in time the main character will see her more and more clearly. But I can see how without this knowledge it can come across as lackluster. Regardless, thank you so much and I will strive to have the future chapters be even greater. (Also sorry about it being long, l'll work on that too)
