Sep 01, 2025
To:Bubbles
I appreciate your feedback, it means a lot. I'm sorry for the issues this series has, it's my first attempt at writing. I do hope future chapters are to your liking, as I do take all things in consideration.
Unfortunately, I do believe your worries may persist for a while longer as only recently have I gotten a better hang at doing this.
I plan on revising the whole story after it's finished but for now, I suppose it might be best to think of this as a draft. I'm truly sorry for not being able to do better, but I aspire to be better.
Please feel free to include further feedback as it'll really help me a lot, having more perspectives on what worked and didn't. Anyways, thank you so much for commenting and liking :)