Sep 22, 2025

I took several days to map out my story, so I ultimately have everything figured out. My concern is that I don't think I'll finish before the deadline. 50,000 words is achievable, but given my vision for this story, I might not complete it. It's going to be a challenge.

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Sep 14, 2025

I had to come back and edit the "two bronze coins" left in Francisco's pocket to "one gold coin" for a symbolic and logical reason in the way future of the book.

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Sep 14, 2025

Probably the longest chapter I have written so far. I try to keep the chapters within 1,000 to 1,500 words. This one stretched a little over. I hope it's easily understood, and Francisco's luck isn't too jarring.

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Jul 31, 2025

To:Mai

Thank you very much! I was particularly worried about the formatting given the dialogue. I might have to do some changes because the next chapter does have more dialogue compared to this one. I'm glad to hear your feedback!

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