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Just a writer trying to make sense of grief, love, and all the silence in between.
I write contemporary, character-driven stories that explore the quiet moments — the ones we often leave unspoken.
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Jul 31, 2025
I like the setup and the rules that are setup for playing chess. There's some really good world building here.
I will say maybe focus on reworking some of the dialogue in chapter one. It felt like an information overload. It's a good idea to introduce new concepts like I liked when the rule about someone not being able to resist when someone challenges them to a chess game or see what one can wager. I think with some polishing, you've got something special here🫶🫶😊
I'm at chapter 2 and what I really liked so far is the philosophical implications of quantifying the soul. There's good world building here.
