Dec 14, 2025

To:A JAWS

Sorry about the wait! I needed a break. Glad you liked it. The first half wasn't Ren, it was a random SL grunt Seraph. It wasn't a dream either. He even spoke to his own Angel named Nora a bit before death. Anyway, thank you for reading!

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Nov 26, 2025

To:striver-k

Appreciated! Based on a part I deciphered from what you said, my response would be the vast experience and desire in all of my work to slow down everything. The goal as a story teller is to try and direct the reader/watcher/etc to see the logic of the world I create, minimizing loose ends and lack of expansion. Thank you, haha. Even when I watch movies or read books, I am very critical on stuff if it doesn't make sense. Often time I would see myself saying, "I can tie it better."

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Nov 25, 2025

To:A JAWS

Adding politics made this chapter a bit harder for me than usual, but it was worth it.

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Nov 21, 2025

To:A JAWS

Glad you liked it! I had so much fun writing this one!

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Nov 19, 2025

To:striver-k

I think this was the biggest complimented and impactful message you ever gave me. It makes busting my butt writing this all day worth it. And it also shows a deep appreciation for your mentioning of: "That’s real craft and I see with each of your work taking root." I never considered myself a writer... I still don't. To me it's solely a tool I use to amplify and share my storytelling. So thank you for being a part of the journey since the beginning and also being patient with me learning. Believe it or not, I haven't written anything years and accidently finding this site helped me grow while also reaching an itch I had for a very long time.

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Nov 18, 2025

To:A JAWS

You're not ready for next chapter haha

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Nov 16, 2025

To:A JAWS

Hehe. What can I say except, you're welcome. Lol. Glad you liked it. I thoroughly enjoyed writing it.

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Nov 14, 2025

To:striver-k

This comment hit hard for me. I appreciate you on my journey firstly. Secondly, it took me a while to create this chapter specifical due to the fact that I strive to always add easter eggs and tie the story to the past as best as possible. So hearing that even my creative choice successfully was perceived in a multi-layered fashion, makes the writing worth it. I have like a little notebook that I physically write in to help keep the dots connected.

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Nov 01, 2025

To:striver-k

"...like truth spoken by someone who’s already lived it once before."
I am often told I put a little too much of me and my experiences in my stories. 🤔

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Oct 29, 2025

To:striver-k

Loved the comment!

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Oct 20, 2025

To:striver-k

I'll try!

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Sep 30, 2025

To:striver-k

I am sorry for the pacing at the end. I know it was a bit rushed compared to the rest of the story. However, I learned a lot and always looked forward to your comments praising the pacing. Hope I didn't let you down. I lost steam after this arc and after I realized I wouldn't truly be able to flesh it out further after starting late. I know I could have continued even if I wasn't in the contest, but I forced this story for it, even when I had other's more dominate in my head. Thanks again!

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