Oct 29, 2025
OH MY DAYS šš„ what is up with your first lines always being absolute bangers!? āThe night bled orangeāāI swear, I had to stop and reread it because who just starts a chapter like that?! It sets the tone instantlyāhaunting, visceral, like you can smell the smoke and feel the heat. From that point on, itās chaos in the best way. The tension doesnāt drop for a single second. The whole fight feels like itās pulsingāevery clash, every breath, every flicker of flame feels alive.The Queen is genuinely nightmare fuel. The way you describe itāmassive, intelligent, relentlessāitās revolting in the most brilliant way. I could see the webs glinting in the firelight, feel the air stick in my throat. And Rose, oh sheās phenomenal. The way she keeps pushing, even when her manaās spent, even when sheās literally pinnedāitās pure grit. Pulling fire from the battlefield around her?? Unreal. Proper goosebumps moment.And Kaiādonāt even get me started. The mana arm scene nearly made me scream. The way it burst into existence, the warmth of it, that golden light cutting through all that darknessāstunning. I love how itās not just raw power, itās desperation, instinct, heart. The whole fight feels like itās being willed into survival.Then that endingā¦ the quiet after the horror, the ash, the peaceāitās heartbreaking and soothing all at once. āBurnt, bruised, and aliveāāI donāt even have words. Itās the kind of exhaustion that feels sacred. This chapter wasnāt just writtenāit was felt. Youāve outdone yourself again šš„
