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Sep 28, 2025
Character motivation is understandable; deeper reflection adds complexity👍
The story shows growth awareness; continue honing structure and flow👍
Overall progression is steady; continued focus on layered development will reward readers.👍
The narrative shows promise; small refinements in perspective can strengthen immersion.👍
Origins is strong—classes and powers feel earned, and interactions bring the world alive.👍
Sep 27, 2025
Underdog arc delivered well—action clear, rhythm consistent. Pacing sharp, tension carried through cleanly, and the upset landed without wasted motion. The payoff felt earned👍
You’re pacing this well. The tone broadens the scope nicely; the female lead gains presence, and intrigue rises as the new contender steps in👍
Sep 26, 2025
Pacing brilliant
Sep 25, 2025
Quieter scene, pacing still feels right. Second heroine steady.👍
Sep 23, 2025
Strong foundation for protagonist’s journey.👍
Sep 22, 2025
Characters feel real.👍