Sep 29, 2025

Somehow, you managed to meet the deadline. The ending feels rushed, but I didn't mind that. Even though it's rushed, you give it a proper ending. Hope that you will continue writing.

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Sep 24, 2025

Cloud that glows in the night. Unique apropos. I really wanted to know how you explain the second layer.

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Sep 23, 2025

That's quite an interesting way to explain gnomes' fields. Their fields are floating in the sky, and there is also a floating River. Really liked that.

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Sep 23, 2025

Congratulations on your half-century. Akira cooked Kael.

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Sep 23, 2025

To: Epti

That's quite a sadistic answer you gave him. I like that.

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Sep 23, 2025

Hmm, I also think this is a bit too dark. The preceding chapters have a wholesome and slice-of-life theme, but it suddenly becomes dark.

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Sep 23, 2025

Why do the chapters get so short?

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