Dec 03, 2025
Come on, you can totally save her. You told us that Kaito can heal her more than once. You couldn't kill the female MC in your previous novel. So, you're killing this one. You may write a decent novel here. But, this is not cool. This is the part I hate most in your writing. The climax with Mr. Kaga was overwhelming. I can accept that. But, now everything from Chapter 21-27 feels worthless.