Nov 03, 2025
Yo Lasagna here, here's my conclusion throughout chapter 1-4.
Chapter 1; Very good prologue, but the scene on the canoe/sampan, instead of choking her child bc of rage, change it to her tightly embracing him while crying because of what happen to their family/village. Also, maybe there's too many character introduced in such short amount of time.
Chapter 2; Very interesting, not much to say other than grammar fix and translation update.
Chapter 3; Introducing ghost in the story is kinda weird, considering I'm also kinda confused whether we're in the modern or old fantasy/feudal era. She's dorky, so i kind like her.
Chapter 4; Typical way to introduce the legendary sword, this is good. But maybe he should learn other skill first before teleportation. The gap is too big.
