Dec 13, 2025
I usually don't react to stories, but I’ve read quite a few. I actually created an account here just to comment on your novel. One thing’s for sure: the storyline is incredibly engaging. The buildup was solid, though I think the execution could use some refinement. That said, it's already better than most of the other novels I've read on this site. A little improvement in grammar would take it even further.
If I had to rate it, I'd give it an 8.7/10. With a bit more attention to the points I mentioned, this story has the potential to rival or even surpass classics like "Familiar of Zero" and "Re:Zero". You've got something special here, just keep improving and pushing forward.
I also wanted to comment because I noticed you post infrequently, so I thought I'd take a moment to show my appreciation. Keep at it, and you could definitely be one of the best!👍
