Mar 11, 2026
I personally loved the story, I haven't read more yet allow me to share some of my opinions.
First of all, the one mistake I see a lot of people do is making the protagonist look so strong and perfect at the very start. Even if they have the reasons, it will be a bit off in my opinion. I like how you showed all the Tyrants but I think you should pace it a bit more slower. Because if you introduce them in a rush, it might be hard for some readers to keep up. So try not to dump most information on a single chapter or so. Other than that, I think the bolding of words might throw some people off.
Overall I like the story as of now and I will read further.
