May 16, 2026
Hi so I found your novel through frettiko and read it
Is english your second language?
The text is quite confusing and the grammar is abhorrent
This might sound quite negative but I think you should try revision before going to next chapters
I think there are two seperate character chara and hawk is that correct? It seems you talk about their ages but it all a little confusing
I am curious what you will do next.
