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A young author who decided to venture into the world of light novels.

registered at: Sep 18, 2026

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Oct 15, 2026

To:Terrycat

She went around commenting on everyone’s stories. I thought the message was so robotic, and then I understood.

The Laments of a Heretic

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Oct 13, 2026

To:TheUnseen912

The pleasure was mine. Setting that aside, the first chapter kept me hooked until the end, which, personally, was simply impeccable — an ending that makes you think: “Man, I need to know what happens here.” I love that.

The Merciless God They Made Me.

Chapter:1

Oct 12, 2026

To:TheUnseen912

The first two excerpts: in the first one, he says, ‘Don’t do that,’ and in the second, he asks: why inscribe that specifically on the door that grants your greatest desire? From there, we get a cut, and he wonders whether this is a test. He talks about the diary, and that part actually flows well, but then there’s another cut and it suddenly jumps to his father speaking. The text makes it clear that it’s a thought, but it’s confusing to understand what exactly he’s thinking about and what door that is.”

The Merciless God They Made Me.

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Oct 11, 2026

It has potential, and I found it interesting, but I suggest working on the beginning a bit more. I got slightly confused with how the story unfolded right after his thoughts. Other than that, I thought the ending was really good.

The Merciless God They Made Me.

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Oct 05, 2026

To:ASockAndEt

Thank you, I made it with a lot of care. I’m glad you liked it.😁

The Laments of a Heretic

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Oct 03, 2026

To:Kei

Thank you very much, I’m working on one and will release it soon.

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