Jul 29, 2021
To:Bubbles
Hey, thanks for the long comment. I actually really agree with you that characterization and well... everything, is really weak in chapter 1. There are very clearly defined traits for the main characters but they're all mostly in the later chapters. In any case I recently started a new job so this will almost definitely not make the word count and I'm still not sure if I want to finish it, but thank you for reading and commenting regardless.