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Jun 02, 2023
omg I actually thought this exact idea in mind, but I love the way you're bringing it to life and the direction you're taking! I always envisioned a mini mystery going along with this unique concept, and I'm glad you're having Kaiden going through with this hunt to find Astella! Great start and I'm already loving the character interactions, I'm really looking forward to more!
Jul 26, 2022
I really love how you describe her visions and interactions in her imaginative fantasy world, like visualizing an idea/change/plan, and her going through with it. And the black and white being potential options she doesn't take. It's like I'm really seeing the world Pandora sees!
Jun 16, 2022
Seems like an interesting and expansive world. I really love your thrilling description and look further seeing how you translate your storytelling and world building more into upcoming character interactions.
