Sep 06, 2021
I have no words. It‘s a tragic ending but very fitting to the entire story arc. Ayumi, how she was portrayed as the main character and her feelings hit close to heart. She felt like a genuine person who yes, got this amazing power but at what cost. The struggles and experiences she went through made her grow as a person and showed her how cruel people and the world can be. She tried her best, but in the end this was the outcome. The fighting scenes were throughout amazing and visually very pleasing. The story flowed very well and the writing was really good. It good better and better with each chapter. I loved how it deviated from the cliche of having a hero protagonist.
Story - 10/10
Suspense - 10/10
Writing - 8.5/10
Character Design - 9/10
Overall - 9/10
You really deserve winning this competition! Good luck! I‘ll be sure to mark my calendar!
